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The Disfunctional One
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| | Subject: Something im starting to write....a work in progress and yes ik it needs work Fri Dec 04, 2009 9:20 pm | |
| The year is 2050 and everything has gone to crime. Crime rates have gone through the roof and very few people are left goodand those people all stick together. Me; im one of the bad guys but only because i only wanted to live. The worst part of it all is i remember it everynight . I was sitting up in my bed wondering why i couldnt fall asleep. It could have been the screams of those beign murdered and raped, honestly it could have been many things. Suddenly i heard my front door creak open and footsteps walking in my home. I quickly yet quietly reached under my pillow and grabbed my pistol only to find out there was no rounds left in it. Nervious i reached under my other pillow and grabbed my machete i left there incase i was ever out of ammo like in this case. Quietly i opened my bedroom door and preceded(sp?) to walk to my kitchen where i heard the clatter. Walking into the kitchen i was grabbed from behind and dropped my machete. Trying to yell a hand went over my mouth preventing me from making any kind of noise i wanted to. With my other hand i quickly reached down grabbed my machete and swung behind me hoping to hit something other than myself. The noise i heard next i will never forget. Still furious I dragged him towards my fridge and ripped the machete out of his back. Using one hand i forced my "robbers" mouth open and with my other hand cut out his tounge. Still not completly satisfied with myself i reached into one of my kitchen cabinets and grabbed a spoon and carved his eyes out of his skull and left him there. Looking there at the bloody mess i just created i finally felt satisfied.
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The Reaper
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| | Subject: Re: Something im starting to write....a work in progress and yes ik it needs work Sun Dec 06, 2009 7:52 pm | |
| keep it coming. i'll do your editing if you want | |
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The Disfunctional One
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| | Subject: Re: Something im starting to write....a work in progress and yes ik it needs work Sun Dec 06, 2009 9:09 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: Something im starting to write....a work in progress and yes ik it needs work Sun Dec 06, 2009 10:18 pm | |
| not the type of thing i would normally read(from what i can see) but it has potential | |
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The Disfunctional One
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| | Subject: Re: Something im starting to write....a work in progress and yes ik it needs work Mon Dec 07, 2009 7:59 pm | |
| i got bored in one of my classes lol | |
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The Reaper
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| | Subject: Re: Something im starting to write....a work in progress and yes ik it needs work Tue Dec 08, 2009 5:58 pm | |
| that's how it starts lol. when are we getting more? | |
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The Disfunctional One
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| | Subject: Re: Something im starting to write....a work in progress and yes ik it needs work Tue Dec 08, 2009 8:24 pm | |
| prob tom during my classes lol i think alot about wht i wanna write in my classes lol | |
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| | Subject: Re: Something im starting to write....a work in progress and yes ik it needs work Tue Dec 08, 2009 8:40 pm | |
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The Disfunctional One
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| | Subject: Re: Something im starting to write....a work in progress and yes ik it needs work Wed Dec 09, 2009 4:42 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: Something im starting to write....a work in progress and yes ik it needs work Thu Dec 10, 2009 5:40 pm | |
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The Disfunctional One
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| | Subject: Re: Something im starting to write....a work in progress and yes ik it needs work Thu Dec 10, 2009 5:58 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: Something im starting to write....a work in progress and yes ik it needs work Fri Dec 11, 2009 11:13 am | |
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The Disfunctional One
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| | Subject: Re: Something im starting to write....a work in progress and yes ik it needs work Fri Dec 11, 2009 4:02 pm | |
| i have alittle more but i dont wanna put it on yet i want to get alittle more | |
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| | Subject: Re: Something im starting to write....a work in progress and yes ik it needs work Fri Dec 11, 2009 8:56 pm | |
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The Disfunctional One
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| | Subject: Re: Something im starting to write....a work in progress and yes ik it needs work Fri Dec 11, 2009 9:08 pm | |
| yep i almost have anpother page well like a page is like a paragraph on this lol but anyways i almost have another one ill work on it tonight prob and ill bring tom so u can see | |
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| | Subject: Re: Something im starting to write....a work in progress and yes ik it needs work Fri Dec 11, 2009 9:13 pm | |
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