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This is just something I wrote let me know what you Guys think! EmptyFri Dec 18, 2009 6:02 pm by The Reaper

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PostSubject: This is just something I wrote let me know what you Guys think!   This is just something I wrote let me know what you Guys think! EmptyTue Oct 20, 2009 7:08 pm
The years have flown by
So much has changed
It never will be the same again

We throw up our caps
We scream and we shout
We never will be here again

And what does the future hold?
What does the next day bring?
What does this all mean?
What will we all do...?
We'll never be here again

The days just keep rollin'
The time just keeps flowin'
It never will be today again

We all say goodbye
We all say farewell
None of us cry, but we'll never be all near again

And what does the future hold?
What does this next day bring?
What does this all mean?
What will we all do...?
We'll never be here again

So long
Farewell
See you another day
See you another way
See you... maybe...

So what does this all mean?
What will we all do...?
What will the future bring?
Since I'll never see you again....
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PostSubject: Re: This is just something I wrote let me know what you Guys think!   This is just something I wrote let me know what you Guys think! EmptyTue Oct 20, 2009 7:13 pm
it is good, gets the point across. some parts sound a little awkward but overall it is a good piece.
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PostSubject: Re: This is just something I wrote let me know what you Guys think!   This is just something I wrote let me know what you Guys think! EmptyFri Oct 23, 2009 9:07 pm
i like it but the 6th one how its 2 short than 1 long makes it seem weird so in my honest opinion change it to make all short or all long lol
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PostSubject: Re: This is just something I wrote let me know what you Guys think!   This is just something I wrote let me know what you Guys think! EmptySat Oct 24, 2009 10:10 am
thanks you too!
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PostSubject: Re: This is just something I wrote let me know what you Guys think!   This is just something I wrote let me know what you Guys think! EmptySat Oct 24, 2009 2:41 pm
no problamm
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